tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post217601143745973456..comments2024-03-20T14:31:49.238-07:00Comments on mole: A Word to the Pudgy KidDalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14523194846272870013noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-46279337726379991512011-04-12T13:15:48.278-07:002011-04-12T13:15:48.278-07:00Was it a long poem? I didn't notice...Was it a long poem? I didn't notice...Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09764296105901909328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-2072820785919301602011-04-09T11:18:17.314-07:002011-04-09T11:18:17.314-07:00Beautiful! If only we could send poems back in tim...Beautiful! If only we could send poems back in time :)Alexandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05384422426207064418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-25708853025385355932011-04-09T08:52:42.778-07:002011-04-09T08:52:42.778-07:00Oh, dear, the horrible sameness of all those iambi...Oh, dear, the horrible sameness of all those iambic pentameter lines starting with conjunction or prepositions in the first stanza! Remember, this is April, folks, and don't hold it against me.Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14523194846272870013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-47502392981903563202011-04-09T06:31:13.661-07:002011-04-09T06:31:13.661-07:00(o)(o)Natalie d'Arbeloffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07757081405040926647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-67842354624483180432011-04-08T20:42:19.379-07:002011-04-08T20:42:19.379-07:00Dale, just just love this poem.Dale, just just love this poem.Umanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-33083207764704575692011-04-08T19:45:46.286-07:002011-04-08T19:45:46.286-07:00So sweet.So sweet.Kathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08487853815646592166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-53685464647955285332011-04-08T18:44:38.452-07:002011-04-08T18:44:38.452-07:00i adore this pudgy kid. he sounds like this poet i...i adore this pudgy kid. he sounds like this poet i met online and once had dinner with at deb's house. but ... no ... couldn't be ....<br /><br />xoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-15788591111511159002011-04-08T17:16:00.632-07:002011-04-08T17:16:00.632-07:00:-) Yup. The secret's out. (E.R. Eddison, The ...:-) Yup. The secret's out. (E.R. Eddison, The Worm Ouroboros.)Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14523194846272870013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-25605933710334751432011-04-08T17:04:25.963-07:002011-04-08T17:04:25.963-07:00Sorry that was me, pointing upwards.Sorry that was me, pointing upwards.Sarsparillahtpp://upasid.com/sarsparillanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-40246869833270250752011-04-08T17:03:15.741-07:002011-04-08T17:03:15.741-07:00Koshtra! (points) :)Koshtra! (points) :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-15847975180203891102011-04-08T16:05:28.991-07:002011-04-08T16:05:28.991-07:00oh, this is great. i might need to write a note to...oh, this is great. i might need to write a note to the frizzy-haired girl with the braces.Kathttp://katuprush.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-27058042106869284972011-04-08T11:15:27.602-07:002011-04-08T11:15:27.602-07:00This is just, exactly what it is supposed to be. ...This is just, exactly what it is supposed to be. Don't change a word.Zhoenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03515663141425057088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-87730507776470834732011-04-08T10:47:07.672-07:002011-04-08T10:47:07.672-07:00Oh oh oh, I love this a lot (and boy, does it reso...Oh oh oh, I love this a lot (and boy, does it resonate.)rbarenblathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882606147795083729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-13569773218581229802011-04-08T09:39:08.072-07:002011-04-08T09:39:08.072-07:00This was delicious and had me nodding with appreci...This was delicious and had me nodding with appreciation, cheering that pudgy little boy on, coaxing him to believe what you've written, and urging him to understand that even if you can't escape the pudgy part of the equation, you can still realize many of the boyhood dreams. <br /><br />Then your borrowed "didn't have time to write a short one" had me giggling. I might have to borrow that some day! Sometimes the bits that get taken away are the ones that resonate most with the writer, and if the writer ain't happy, ain't nobody gonna be happy! <br /><br />As a reader, it's always nice to come to the end of a piece and feel like you got served a full meal. Yummy!ntexas99http://nancyfromtexas.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-76747032410874012002011-04-08T09:10:12.835-07:002011-04-08T09:10:12.835-07:00I'm sorry it's such a long poem, but (v Sc...I'm sorry it's such a long poem, but (v Schiller) I didn't have time to write a short one.Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14523194846272870013noreply@blogger.com