tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post2058960313220110435..comments2024-03-20T14:31:49.238-07:00Comments on mole: Blunder and PeelDalehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14523194846272870013noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-21004837896079018942011-04-01T14:25:08.421-07:002011-04-01T14:25:08.421-07:00I love epigraphs. One day I'd like to write a...I love epigraphs. One day I'd like to write a book that is more epigraph than original text since discovering and connecting the epigraphs to each other and to my writing seem to give me as much pleasure as my writing.<br /><br />This is a great companion to Rachel's poem, which is itself a Midrash on Genesis. So your poem is kind of a reflection on a reflection. Your second stanza is so strong and sensuous -- a real delight. I see it, feel it, smell it, and taste in dizzying turns.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-82005274521748010562011-04-01T12:02:37.813-07:002011-04-01T12:02:37.813-07:00Thank you dear friends! I don't think the part...Thank you dear friends! I don't think the part about the syrup is actually stitched in yet, but I think it belongs. I think.Dalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14523194846272870013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-13508944144841378272011-03-31T22:29:07.206-07:002011-03-31T22:29:07.206-07:00Just amazing.Just amazing.Umanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-80257076134483947922011-03-31T15:16:55.856-07:002011-03-31T15:16:55.856-07:00I love the last three lines especially!I love the last three lines especially!caroleehttp://caroleesherwood.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-1673837247418696632011-03-31T10:20:31.788-07:002011-03-31T10:20:31.788-07:00What a lovely pairing!What a lovely pairing!Dickhttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-27788389850233655102011-03-31T09:28:28.787-07:002011-03-31T09:28:28.787-07:00Oh, oh, Dale -- beautiful, and I'm honored to ...Oh, oh, Dale -- beautiful, and I'm honored to have my own lines here too. The last four lines especially make me clutch at my heart.rbarenblathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882606147795083729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5349472.post-91491462712885873722011-03-31T09:06:20.972-07:002011-03-31T09:06:20.972-07:00I needed to read such a poem this morning. Thank y...I needed to read such a poem this morning. Thank you, Dale.Luisa Iglorianoreply@blogger.com